The court says the case contains glaring errors.

法院称调查存在许多明显错误。

You may not see a glaring error that someone else notices in seconds.

你可能看不到别人在几秒钟内注意到的一个明显的错误。

For me, the most glaring errors I find on the re-read have to do with character motivation (related to character development but not quite the same) .

在我看来，重读过程中最刺眼的错误多半关系到人物动机（与人物发展相关，但不完全是一回事）。