It's not good because it just lists data, one point after another.

这并不好，因为它只是一项项的列举数据。

Otherwise, you'll just end up listing the data, one point after another, and this is not a good idea.

否则你最终只是一条条列出数据，而这并不是一个好主意。

Based on the job description I see that you listed data entry as a key responsibility in this role and I believe that these strengths will directly assist me in doing the job as efficiently and accurately as possible.

根据岗位描述，我注意到贵公司对该岗位的数据录入技能有明确要求，我相信，这些优势会超强助攻，帮我尽可能高效精准地完成工作。