His hard, dry statement needs some little editing to soften it into the terms of real life.
他生硬、枯燥的陈述需要一些小的编辑, 以将其软化为现实生活中的用语。
半熟的牛排
And, Mary, " she lowered her voice and glanced in the direction of the room next door, " I don't know how a hard, dry sob would go through the 'phone, so I won't try to get it over.